It got awkward when Reshma was introduced to Sahil. She already knows him but had to exchange the pleasantries like she met him for the first time. To add to the awkwardness Ajay left her with Sahil as he got a phone call.
Sahil: “Hmm. So you seem very happy?”
Reshma: “Of course. Ajay is a good man but I have not embraced life the way you did. I didn’t climb the success ladder forgetting past so fast!”
Sahil: “Hmm. So you seem very happy?”
Reshma: “Of course. Ajay is a good man but I have not embraced life the way you did. I didn’t climb the success ladder forgetting past so fast!”
Sahil smiled. The shadow of his smile held so many questions, answers and emotions but it was disrupted as Ajay came back.
Written for Saturday’s 100 words prompt on Write Tribe.
Written for Saturday’s 100 words prompt on Write Tribe.
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Huh! You cannot leave a reader at a cliff like that 😦
Oh!! Why did Ajay came back so early!!
Good one, Afshan! Liked it! 🙂
Liked it… hope she recreates her new world carefully
Wish Ajay had taken some more time to come back…………………..
Love the twist in the story, Afshan and a case of unrequited love and he didn't had time to express his love to her. Thanks for commenting on my blog.
Cheers
Vishal
I'm very curious… think about expanding this to tell the full story.
Oh wow, I would love to pick his brain and find out what he is thinking!!! What is he smiling about? I have come across men from my past that gave me the same reaction and I just wanted to kick the answers out of them. It was maddening! LOL Brilliant write!
Kathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Loved the intrigue and the open ending Afshan.
If only we could look into his mind … so Afshan we'll look forward to part 2 when we get to look into his mind. Thanks for writing on my prompt.
Liked it! But curious to know more…!!
Phir kya hua, Afshan?
Phir kya vahi hua jo har kahani me hota hai – the end 😛
me too ! lets think if I get any spicy thoughts 😉
ya if only minds cud be read 😉 so much easy than decoding the smiles 🙂
Thanks for givign this wonderful prompt suzy
Thanks alka 🙂
I will hold u wen u r at the edge of cliff 😉 hehe bad joke
Ya 100 words me itna hi hosaka 😛
ya if only some one stopped him we wud hav known more 🙂
thanks shilpa
Ya looks like every one wishing the same
Thanks for dropping by Kalpana
ya thanks for reading vishal 🙂
🙂 🙂 haha lets think for the next prompt
thanks kalpanaa
BINGO on that Kathy . I have come across weird men too and they say reading a woman's mind is tough . MEN R TOUGHEST Nuts
thanks for reading dear
So much history and so little time. Nice job on the cliffhanger.
Thanku for not letting my fall 🙂 ❤
ooopsie.. I meant letting me fall 😛
I hope Reshma has leads a happy life ahead.
I too hope so
Thanks for comment Diana
Haha
Thank you damayanti
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